Comments by ebonyamore
- "powerful churning motion in this. restlessness and contempt-laced lust. The first stanza caught me and didn't let me go until after the last word. and i did love that first stanza. feelings that i know well. thanks for the great read!"
Posted by ebonyamore on "The Watcher" by sixsixnine
- "Oh GOD....the question of my life. staring at me and mocking me. "we all want what we desire but will we retrieve it from the fire?" soooo many desires and so many fires to contemplate...is the prize worth the price? is the yearning more painful than the inevitable burning? GOD! That line smacked me upside the head and my ears are still ringing. fucking brilliant! "
Posted by ebonyamore on "#2" by sixsixnine
