Comments by ebonyamore
- "I read this 5 times, each more slowly than the time before and every time I read it, it got deeper and better. You don't use many words here but you say SO MUCH. and that last couplet was like a slap to the face. I've been using the word "profound" a lot lately, but that couplet felt like lightning to me. despair, anguish, bone deep coldness. and within the resignation of the sentiment was the a tiny seed of something nameless that from this vantage point looks a little like peace? or maybe I'm just rambling. but I did really enjoy this read."
Posted by ebonyamore on "Finding an End..." by A Life Without You
