Comments by Lylani

"This is so in your head in a chaotic, instant snap shot kind of way, its an amazing write as it follows through without loosing focus but at the same time not seeming edited or forced "
Posted by Lylani on "Angry Persona" by Soldier Of Silence

"I feel like each couple of lines zooms in on the picture closer each time until the true scene is revealed, very effective, really liked this"
Posted by Lylani on "I Hate Marionettes in the Dark" by Soldier Of Silence