Comments by Audrey_Star

""Of the downfall my pride has brought" a great line and a great piece. but it almost reads like it could use more.but the fact that it feels like it could use more only makes it better because it leaves the reader with the ability to conclude the thought "
Posted by Audrey_Star on "As Yet Untitled" by GreekPhilosopher

"makes me think. I like it. even the repeating is nice. and that's sometimes hard to pull off. well done. "
Posted by Audrey_Star on "I Once Knew A Man" by GreekPhilosopher

""All these people are one and the same Living together in a world full of shame." well said. "
Posted by Audrey_Star on "Within" by GreekPhilosopher