Comments by The Lipstick Factor
- "The closing stanza brings this piece to a end like a door slamming. Good flow, hard to do with the subject matter--so often ends up sounding "ranty" and this is not, in any way that. "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Beauty of the World." by Aleas
- "Seems to me you've pretty much summed up the human condition, but with rare eloquence. I like the way you work words. "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Dare/Dream." by Aleas
