Comments by asphyxia
- "i love everythng about this poem except that you put two lines next to each other that both end with the word "time." (But that's personal preference, really so don't pay too much attention to it). "
Posted by asphyxia on "Lipstick...you wear it well" by BeautifullyRuined
- "i love this... it's such a wonderful piece! this is my first time reading your stuff; i had to track you down after your invite on myspace (thank you btw). im glad you added me, too, because apparently i've missed out on some great writing!"
Posted by asphyxia on "Smoking you away" by BeautifullyRuined
