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Comments by EnlightenedFailure

"I less than three you darlin... :):) i have something to say about this poem.. very deep though... echos rewritten... i like it"
Posted by EnlightenedFailure on "Alone in a sea of people" by SilentDreamer

"I dont think [have] would be the right tense Insanity... i Belieave it should just be [happen]...."
Posted by EnlightenedFailure on "Walking in fear of love" by SilentDreamer

"YAY.... it finally works :):) seems good to me...."
Posted by EnlightenedFailure on "My shakespearean sonnet." by SilentDreamer

""Embers will burn brightly only for a few hours" im not sure if this is to late.... but this is 12....."
Posted by EnlightenedFailure on "My shakespearean sonnet." by SilentDreamer

""Leaving millions stars alone for the night" sshe will take off points for that.... millions stars ???? id revise the line"
Posted by EnlightenedFailure on "My shakespearean sonnet." by SilentDreamer

""Dieing away only to leave a chill to stay " 11 syllables..... away is 2 .... k im done for the night call me if u need more helpp.... use dictionary.com... it shows u how many syllables in a word... gl"
Posted by EnlightenedFailure on "My shakespearean sonnet." by SilentDreamer

""beware it will lose its grasp in time" 9 syllables .... graps is one syllable"
Posted by EnlightenedFailure on "My shakespearean sonnet." by SilentDreamer

"alone is two syllables.... soooo.... yeah... first three lines so far...."
Posted by EnlightenedFailure on "My shakespearean sonnet." by SilentDreamer

"and shimmering 3 syllables"
Posted by EnlightenedFailure on "My shakespearean sonnet." by SilentDreamer

"isnt sight one syllable?"
Posted by EnlightenedFailure on "My shakespearean sonnet." by SilentDreamer

"This is the first poem i think I've ever commented on.... Very good i like it... Hits ever so close to home with me"
Posted by EnlightenedFailure on "I do (not) love you" by BeautifullyRuined

"I agree. Very good. I love the imagery... you make someone able to understand very well such a encounter. Though this isnt normally my kind of read... I still like. ♠"
Posted by EnlightenedFailure on "Waiting for you shall kill me." by SilentDreamer

"I beliaeve you mean wild lust kills... Love is the one thing that will keep you alive."
Posted by EnlightenedFailure on "Chance" by EnlightenedFailure

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