Comments by Step_20
- "That wasn't fair, really, because your poem kicked ass. Just what I thought of at the time. I didn't intend to write that. You are right, relationships are hard and you wore it all in this poem. kept my attention well.
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Posted by Step_20 on "The Life Story..." by slightlygothic89
- "It was complete, perfect, except for one thing.
You left out all the good times,
sympathy thief
learn from the torture, the sadness, the grief
you'll be a father some day too, with kids that you'll try to teach"
Posted by Step_20 on "The Life Story..." by slightlygothic89
