Comments by carlosjackal

  • "I've been rereading many of your old works over recent weeks, this one included..Just no one else writes like you do..I'd love to see at least a slight return from you. When you last posted, the 'credit crunch' and following recession were just looming in the distance, so I'm sure you'd have plenty to say 4 years on :) "
    Posted by carlosjackal on "zebra stripes and herd logic" by capt_funguy
  • "There's a delicate reflective quality to this piece that I really, really like..and I love the dragonfly metaphor..how the destruction reveals no secrets, no magic..the mind does not fly, only denies, too much forced effort, too much try. You are one beautiful dragon fly writer, you've stumbled upon the secret and grinning all the way..Sweet, my Yank brother :) P.S. I'm really hoping you make it to England next Summer..have a few pints and then jump on a couple of dragonflies and head towards the burning of the midnight lamp."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "intentionalism" by capt_funguy
  • "..really is. Decorated flesh ripped to shreds and left to pick at the corpse of lies. Powerful stuff, indeed. -Carl"
    Posted by carlosjackal on "lunghaus" by capt_funguy
  • "I can't get over your play on language, play with language to wrench out this piece of rotten magnificence. Like an urban grand guignol, a house of shit so intriguing and revolting at the same time. The American Dream And Family shown up for what it.."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "lunghaus" by capt_funguy
  • "d, so more comments will follow as this is my first reading. But, overall, first reading? Classic capt! You never disappoint, my friend. -Carl"
    Posted by carlosjackal on "lunghaus" by capt_funguy
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