Comments by The Zebra Warrior
- "agreed....you took the basic format a step further with the potency of your lines in all their drug-taking nakedness...powerfully understated and raw indeed...excellent"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Window sill (draft)" by skully
- "excellent originality...is this a re-post I think I recognise the title? Anyway...the poem twisted and turned in its labryinthian skin...and the staccato presses of language connected to thought was write out the school of avant-garde; interesting to see, even better to read. I hope you receive some feedback for being something different; it's not always easy, it's even harder to be good with it. Best regards - fine effort, Col.."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Steam of conscious" by skully
- "when did you write this? Blair is no longer in office...just curious as to you mentioning his name here. Another political poem...well written enough, probably a little mroalistic for me, with a slightly obvious stated ending. Not bad..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Uprising" by skully
