Comments by The Zebra Warrior

  • "welllllllllll.....I'm disagreeing with you....I say it captures a dream-esque feel which needs no definitive start or end...so there ya sasquatch hairy lipped goobster...hahaha *runs*"
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "monochrome dreams." by verablue
  • "kinda jumpy...it feels like it starts somewhere in the middle which makes it displaced but interesting because the language is so unusual...it has a dreamy feel matched with human focus...interesting to me, it does feel incomplete though..."
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "monochrome dreams." by verablue
  • "pyschosomatic melodramas.....chafes like ruby dreams; the straight jacket poetics.....something almost cold lonely and investigating; the shifting tone of this represents uncertianty and disillusion in a crafted fashion...totally wicked!!"
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "de//fragment this mess" by verablue
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