"I like the effort. In my opinion, trying new stuff is what this poetry nonsense is all about. This has validity. Nice job." Posted by Equinox Asylum on "holloween" by thefairytaleheart
"Wonderfully somber. I feel this way often, but can not express it such a realistic fashion (without soaking in metaphor) as you have done so nicely here." Posted by Equinox Asylum on "fading heart" by thefairytaleheart