Comments by Twilight
- "i definitely feel the message in this. but the rhyme is forced..and the use of short talk such as 'cuz' doesnt give the poem much effect. but in some parts your flow gets strong..."
Posted by Twilight on "To Cry" by Cinn
- "holy shiznit...this is perfect. so powerful...oh man. i can barely piece a sentence together. so blunt. incredible."
Posted by Twilight on "Another Crush" by Cinn
- "when your with them..love is awesome and the world is beautiful, your skipping through daisies with them. when you lose them...shit bitch fuck damn asshole...slit wrists and die. see the contrast? i hope so. i love the denial sense in this one."
Posted by Twilight on "Love Can't Be All That Bad" by Cinn
