Comments by TheBardOfBlasphemy

  • "ha. Cool. I thought it was going to end happy, but you picked a much better way. So desperate you'll tap your heels together in vain hope. It's like thinking "i'll close my eyes and this bad thing will go away" and then walking into a door"
    Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "Yellow-Brick Roads" by peril_notion
  • "pretty good rhyming flow... i love it that you could fit "discombobulate" in... freaky fucking word that it is... some of the ideas are very easy to identify with... a lot of people would... strange that not more have said so..."
    Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "Capeless Hero" by peril_notion
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