Comments by All Members
- "When I first posted on this site i was a little confused but all the short pieces that begin with the phrase "In this dream" are part of a chapbook of poems I'd recently written called "In this dream" And there is a 'foreword' to this capbook and an epilogue called "backword" and all of these brief pieces are snippets of actual dreams that I have tried to build into a series of joined ideas. I've also tried to turn these thoughts from myself to the reader by stating in the beginning of each piece "In this dream "YOU" in an attempt to force the reader to adopt my position and cause the reader to put himself in my place and therefore gain a sense of comradery with the writer."
Posted by tonebone on "Grave Diggers Winter" by tonebone
- "thank you for your comment natalie I will check the spelling errors tho spelling has always been a pain in the ass...lol"
Posted by tonebone on "Ambiguitys' Dillema" by tonebone
- "you're very talented! i liked the flow and structure of this piece alot! (check back as there are several spell errors) an otherwise exceptional write!"
Posted by natalie on "Ambiguitys' Dillema" by tonebone
- "A unique relationship to be sure, TB; with some side roads to ponder in the tapestry you weave so well. Cheers my friend! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Ambiguitys' Dillema" by tonebone
- "Wow TB! And welcome to DP. I first read this as a bitter, routine personification until the eminent domain hit me right between the eye balls. The things we do while those little skeletons keep accumulating in our closets. Cheers sadly, and welcome again to DP."
Posted by dwells on "Grave Diggers Winter" by tonebone
