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- "Be careful out there. There are things lurking about in my atmosphere that one should be wary of. Thank you Raheema. Hope you find your way home. "
Posted by Smiles on "Varying Degrees of Existence " by Smiles
- "Thank you Raheema. I'm very glad you enjoyed this peek into my mind. "
Posted by Smiles on "Unfinished " by Smiles
- "It feels like a bit of a trip, into and away from reality. Thanks for this journey. I followed you all the way. Now I need to find my way back home. I'm floating somewhere in your atmosphere. "
Posted by Unknown on "Varying Degrees of Existence " by Smiles
- "Hauntingly beautiful with a melancholic splendor. I loved this. It lingers. And the ending, "No one wants to sleep next to a ghost," is almost ambiguous.
You think you know what this piece is about, and then you can flip it to mean so much else.
It wasn't long, but it didn't need to be. You captured everything perfectly.
Thank you for sharing. You're very inspiring. "
Posted by Unknown on "Please Come Home " by Smiles
- ""Razor sharp lips
Pressed
Against my wrist
Give me a kiss
And watch me fall"
This is the kind of imagery that makes me feel spiritually aroused and visually satisfied.
I love reading such vivid pictures of dangerous situations. I guess that says even more about my mental state than would probably be polite for common folk.
But hey, we poets aren't common. Merely tortured and numerous.
Lolz, great job. I really enjoyed this.
The devil is in the details.
"While you play God, I'll be the devil in your head."
Nice. Very nice indeed. "
Posted by Unknown on "Unfinished " by Smiles
- "I like trying to find a good contrast between the two. Beautifully morbid, I guess. Thank you for reading Renegade. "
Posted by Smiles on "Elegy" by Smiles
- "A fine couple. I agree with IamZero, that this is a beautiful, bittersweet piece.
Something about the second paragraph reminds me of how we all house a skeleton inside our velvet lining. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by Renegade on "Elegy" by Smiles
- "Thank you for reading Zero. I definitely liked writing this one. "
Posted by Smiles on "Elegy" by Smiles
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