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  • "holly fucking shit dude you put that picture in my head it was like i was watching a movie i think that yeah this gets thrown to the favs list..."
    Posted by Unknown on "A Soldier's Death" by Chimauron
  • "Holy Shit! ...damn, the blood spilled out the monitor and all over my keys.. You fucking rock! ~b"
    Posted by blue on "LIAR" by Chimauron
  • "...seems that just enough thought was put into this to get your point across precisely...this hit the spots it was supposed to, I think... -Darun"
    Posted by SilentStalker on "Just Enough" by Chimauron
  • "lovely write...so brutal..and honest..i think u just figured out the meaning of life...or the guide to have "just enough" of it..."
    Posted by Grey Lies on "Just Enough" by Chimauron
  • "there's just something about being able to map out a train of thought like this that i just love...it reminds me of me :) elisa"
    Posted by elisa on "Just Enough" by Chimauron
  • "Haha.. This was fucking brutal. Nice. "Sever (the legs of my soul, so it cannot run from you)" - That line was creative and excellent. Thanks."
    Posted by Unknown on "LIAR" by Chimauron
  • "I should read that book I guess... Like the foreword says, I took inspiration from the Charge of the Light Brigade. But I'll check it out :)"
    Posted by Chimauron on "A Soldier's Death" by Chimauron
  • "When you right abstract poetry, you should try to go for what feels right rather then what sounds right. Emotion builds character ^_^"
    Posted by Trapped_with_Insanity on "Argument" by Chimauron
  • ""Is the logic beginning to break down, after all this time"? *Touched* You say this is one of the few attempts at abstract poetry. Prehaps you should try a few more times. This was great. ~Diviana"
    Posted by Trapped_with_Insanity on "Argument" by Chimauron
  • "I agree with Klara, this definitly reminds me of "All quite on the Western Front" by Remarque. You have created a spectacular write. This choice of topic usually is already a sensitive subject, but you just magnified it ten-fold.~Diviana"
    Posted by Trapped_with_Insanity on "A Soldier's Death" by Chimauron
  • "Careful about all the bumps, guys. I might start gettin an ego complex :) I'm glad you like it so much. I'll make more like it ;)"
    Posted by Chimauron on "A Soldier's Death" by Chimauron
  • "*open-mouthed* wooaaww this is outstanding! intense, bottom line, disregard to any bounds or limitations. this is absolutely grade A bad-ass!"
    Posted by Unknown on "A Soldier's Death" by Chimauron
  • "My heart is a sail caught in full blow And I am it's helpless vessel - Nice language! I like the flow of this, it is kinda exciting to read."
    Posted by Gideon Lost on "Argument" by Chimauron
  • "::speechless::...."A handful of boys made men by blood"...wonderfully captured...(reminds me of a book i read..."All Quiet on the Western Front"..by Remarque)...also a powerful ending... "
    Posted by Grey Lies on "A Soldier's Death" by Chimauron
  • "Ghastly!!! This was very very intense. Your imagery and the hatred and resentment are all so cold. . . I love it! Good write."
    Posted by Gideon Lost on "A Soldier's Death" by Chimauron
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