Comments by All Members
- "Thank you very much Rose. That was one of my really early poems I just wanted to share with those I thought might be wanting to say the same thing. Thanks~Amanda~"
Posted by HaUnTed_sOuL on "Another Day In Hell" by HaUnTed_sOuL
- "When you say "don't worry," are you feeling sorry for your Dad, that he can't figure you out either? Or are you making fun of him? Are you jeering or comiserating?"
Posted by Liz on ""Dad"" by HaUnTed_sOuL
- "Why do you need the pain, what caused it? How do you FEEL, what is it LIKE, when you struggle between wanting to smile and not being able to? Explore something a little deeper next time."
Posted by Liz on ""Dad"" by HaUnTed_sOuL
- "I know it feels unique to you, and in certain respects each story is unique. But in all honestly no one cares that you have pain. What we care about is how artistically you can express it, and whether or not you're strong enough to overcome it."
Posted by Liz on ""Dad"" by HaUnTed_sOuL
- "As you spend more time on DP, you'll start to notice that the average feeling about this kind of poem is that we all know the story, and no one wants to here it again."
Posted by Liz on ""Dad"" by HaUnTed_sOuL
- "You have executed the exquisite feelings of the heart marvellously. I've often wanted to say something like this but I can't . . and through so few verses you have conveyed the feeling that brushes past us all. A great write, Amanda ~ Rose."
Posted by Unknown on "Another Day In Hell" by HaUnTed_sOuL
- "It's always great to see new writers. Pissed off high school goth poetry, not so much. I'd really love it if you wrote something a little more original, something to showcase your diverse skills. It's obvious you can write, now show us how well."
Posted by Liz on "Another Day In Hell" by HaUnTed_sOuL
