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- "Yes 1978 is the year I was born. I thought "I must have written a thousand! Well the number 1978 is as good as any, and this box is more personal then the rest." ;)"
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Box Nr 1978" by A_Puppet_Show
- "The point is that I do not know why I do it like this. As I said it is an obsession with the box shape, and making it flow within extreme limitation. It has to work without hurting the feel of the poem. "
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Box Nr 1978" by A_Puppet_Show
- "I have no exact idea how many I have written, but it has become an obsession. More then just the box. It is the fff, dsds. And the personal codes(words I know I allways use in a certain way) like sound-safe-dance-again(I stand safe and sound dance again)."
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Box Nr 1978" by A_Puppet_Show
- "This is a very compelling write. The imagery is fascinating and the italicised lines extremely effective. I think of matches and secrets and passion, and I know that I don't entirely 'get' it but it doesn't matter. Format is fantastic. A genuinely interes"
Posted by purr_verse on "Box Nr 1978" by A_Puppet_Show
- ""...slippery surface, and I fold" Like an origami. Yes, you do write in odd boxes. Quite surreal. There is texture & 'mechanical' shapes in these variable receptacles: rectangular, square, elongated, round, oval, packaged poems. "captivating". ..."
Posted by Unknown on "Unwilling Catechist" by A_Puppet_Show
- ""I stand skin peeled" Although I do not understand the title, I love the title - it is why I read this poem and am glad I did. There's some kind of magic, something fantastical in the shape of the 'Box' you created, OK, I think I now get the idea of..."
Posted by Unknown on "Box Nr 1978" by A_Puppet_Show
- "...the title, like Poem # ___. The 1978 made me think of the year; do you have 1,978 of these box-type poems? Interesting concept & quite original, I believe, like haikus. Very well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Box Nr 1978" by A_Puppet_Show
- "That is not far off. The imagery came from Monkeys brain. Mechanical swanes with dead staring eyes swimming forever in circles on the grave of gods. Yes he does scare me sometimes .. Here the Mechanical guardian is Jesus."
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Unwilling Catechist" by A_Puppet_Show
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