Comments by All Members
- "Sorrowful indeed. But if you're writing this, I think you're on the way to accepting it happened. Keep it up."
Posted by Nimue44 on "Overcast" by LeadAndSway
- ":( I'm sorry for your loss. "I could tear this world in half if it would bring you back" I think anyone who has lost someone feels the same. This is a nice way to honor their memor."
Posted by Unknown on "Overcast" by LeadAndSway
- "The sorrow sings out like a wave in this piece. It rises and falls, contemplating where to put itself. Well wrought, my dear. "
Posted by Lux on "Overcast" by LeadAndSway
- "Quite a commentary on guns here. I like the metaphor use here especially the last line cheers"
Posted by Unknown on "Psychosis" by LeadAndSway
- "Your username matches quite nicely this first work: it's like a demented dance. You lead, we readers... Sway."
Posted by Nimue44 on "Psychosis" by LeadAndSway
