Comments by All Members
- "this poem is so great--I love the rolercoaster metaphor, I love your word choice, structure and rhymen scheme and I also love the insane voice that comes through here I have a couple poems with that voice myself)I look forward to reading more by you"
Posted by Northstar on "Catch Twenty-Two" by GirlintheBox
- "I agree with the commenters here who came to visit before me. You should listen to the 13th Floor Elevators. They also recorded a song called "Roller Coaster" (the song title is 2 words)."
Posted by Unknown on "Catch Twenty-Two" by GirlintheBox
- ""For if it is once more shattered
In this form it shall remain
And the existence of the masterpiece
No more" i loved that part, a masterpeice here indeed, best of oyurs i've read so far, excellent."
Posted by Unknown on "Masterpiece" by GirlintheBox
- ""All her life she'd seen the world
Through the eyes of the belittled." captivating, the way you define your emotional battle from the 3rd person perspective is wonderful. Keep it up."
Posted by Unknown on "Fade Away" by GirlintheBox
- "ohh my..I completely in my own way I'm sure...understand and feel this...It's like you were writing for me and my life...amazing @)---;--- ~*~Pixie~*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Catch Twenty-Two" by GirlintheBox
