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  • "Carroll never did acid, actually. He wrote Alice as a way of showing the "evils" of mathematics & how it would draw followers away from God. "
    Posted by Feral on "Stain;" by whisperingwalls
  • "I sent a marrage prposal UPS i'm waiting on a replay..LOl... Your gifted... From the toes the brain your gifted..."
    Posted by Devilish on "Stain;" by whisperingwalls
  • "Because it can produce a few notes, tho they are very flat; and it is nevar put with the wrong end in front."
    Posted by Feral on "Stain;" by whisperingwalls
  • "Thanks for this piece. It was amazing, especially with the ravens on the writing desk. "
    Posted by Unknown on "Stain;" by whisperingwalls
  • "They're spirits of the night, manifestations of ourselves, or simply inspirational deities to pour our stains upon. Insightful piece."
    Posted by Virgils Vigil on "Stain;" by whisperingwalls
  • "This was an earlier piece, so it was a bit rough. I agree the part about the sailors was a little disoriented, I wanted to bring a human element to the piece. I`m partial to alliteration, and I appreciate the comment."
    Posted by whisperingwalls on "Checkmate and the Sea" by whisperingwalls
  • "you seem to have developed this sort of fragmented style of writing. i am not sure it works here so well for me. the section about the sailors seems out of place for me. i do find your description of the sea lovely, the alliteration of the w's at the beginning i like especially. you present a great scene here."
    Posted by Unknown on "Checkmate and the Sea" by whisperingwalls
  • "feels like temptation you know will end...in stalemate...maybe something that should remain a dream? ... clever use of imagery here...I like the uncertainty and the possibilities...you going down with the ship or going to make it alive....?"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "Checkmate and the Sea" by whisperingwalls
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