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"Dead are dead many ways,, I liked this "
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Grocer of Despair" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

""in blonde"...Those 2 words...Bright and explosive."
Posted by carlosjackal on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Bam! Knockout punch to the gut."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Forever" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"I love the way your words tease and tantalise the muse both at the same time...Your works really work up the over excited muso in me and this piece was right up there."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Grocer of Despair" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Brilliant, just brilliant.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "an offer, declined" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"sometimes i dont understand, like im not clever enough to get the meaning behind your words, but the feeling i know...i feel these words and they make me ache, some part of me understands even if its not on the surface level. "
Posted by Unknown on "an offer, declined" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"infinite riches in a small room"
Posted by Unknown on "Grocer of Despair" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"im not sure.....this is crushing enough. egads. talk about pointed. a minimalist. ......funny how the simplest things are so fragile"
Posted by Unknown on "Forever" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"wow short but right to the point i like it keep it up"
Posted by Unknown on "A Clean Death" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"aaaaawwwwesome. i can't wait to read another. read this one a few times to let it sink in."
Posted by natalie on "Binary Rust" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"full of sentiment in the between the line spaces... i like "
Posted by natalie on "Forever" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"that is a harsh brutality, in reality, understanding there might very well be some things never recovered; scars are funny things, they show character, they show heart, and they are not supposed to hurt, but they do......true wounds are not skin deep; they impale. all the way through space and time and bodies and minds......i like the 'half-dead prism'; as if the beauty of colours is choked back by a blackness............your writes are so visceral and scything."
Posted by Unknown on "Memories and Cardboard Tassles Pt. 3" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"i think this poem is amazing, and could have many meanings,depending on the person. poetry(and music) and most beautiful that way."
Posted by Unknown on "Here We Dance With Ghosts" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"the lackadaisical nature of 'humans' todae; how they bear witness to naught but themselves, take in nothing intrinsic, and neglect the touch that lasts...in a fight for the mundane...and the irony in the closing couplet.......going where the dead are strewn beneath memory and feet.....and at least there, one could sense some truth......will be a timeless harsh sur.reality. my own meager interpretation. kick arse write."
Posted by Unknown on "We Fought for Seville-Orange" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"i like this piece, though i believe in the power of language as a lifter of unnecessary pain...it can be a mean of destruction of the halo surrounding secret sufferings...or can destroy another soul...as we do everyday..."
Posted by DarkBlueClearWater on "Antithetical Deconstruction" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"So awesome man.. Love the texture and color of the sky.. Like aluminum ..metal like the things we use ..the sun.. Now we enjoy the advancements of technology,. We can be in a microwave oven and be oblivious .. Cancer phones .. Most people have annual to life contracts with those..much like cancer sticks.. Well expressed.. It was funny how it all played out ..the ending close it all up well.. A natural beach next to the burning minds under unnatural skies.?"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "We Fought for Seville-Orange" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"there is something about your work that i find amazing and witty and biting and critical. this is no exception. "
Posted by Unknown on "We Fought for Seville-Orange" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Interesting statement .. Something to ponder on.. That which will destroy us.. The power of words in the air. Strain from the lips to the simplest form ..chopped to fragments .. Something so simple..so complicated. Beautifully written .. The way it reads ..slips off my sober tongue"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Antithetical Deconstruction" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

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