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- "i agree with carlos, when i think poetry, i think of poems like this. that have the stench of life written allll over it, and not with rose colored rims i might add. superb and just wonderful! "
Posted by iceshot11 on "Self Portrait in A Poem" by jonLyndon
- "I've found myself rifling through DP a bit more again, recently.. and I naughtily borrowed the company iPad at work today on my break, thinking that it'd been so long since i'd visited to yours. I fell head first into this and found it tinted the rest of my day with it's images.. you know i've always been a big fan of the gritty city-esque backdrops that often accompany your work, but I loved reading this.. it was quite refreshing and actually really relevant to me now, in a way that I doubt I could articulate into this little box. Actually I felt like I really noticed how long it's been since I first found your work, reading this. Perhaps it's my imagination but I felt like I could see a real mind-shift and maybe that's where i'm drawing the relevance from.."
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "Until Those Last Lost Beach Sequences" by jonLyndon
- "thoroughly engrossing this is...in imagery and metaphor ... leaves me with a sense of found wisdom and lost meaning and a promise of future answers...congrats on poem of the day Jon ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Factotum Desert" by jonLyndon
- ""stumbling drunk down the sink-hole gutters/my gut a gust of bourbon vomit in the voodoo slum"..."slip into moist virgin's egocentricity/a mad gold mine, velvet and vinyl"...loved the section where "carrying my bones, my flesh, my shoes, my sins, my slaughters, my laughters..."...what can I say...this is a masterpiece in word."
Posted by Unknown on "The Factotum Desert" by jonLyndon
- "Wow....just effin' superb piece. I'm getting lost in this the more I read it. There is an apocalyptic end-of-the-world feel to many of your works but this is one that leaves me speechless & scrambling to keep up. A journey of words I have taken on several occasions. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Factotum Desert" by jonLyndon
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