Comments by All Members
- "i went through this 6 years ago and i'm still trying to find some comfort in it myself. but i really hope you find the strength to keep yourself together while things fall apart. in the end we find a way to deal with it. *hugs* i don't know you but i know"
Posted by dying angel on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
- "i can relate to the pain of watching someone slip from your fingers. because you can always pick someone back up when they fall...but not when they fall to their death. i can't say much of anything that would console you because "
Posted by dying angel on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
- "but sometimes we take things for granted and waste the time given to us, locked in this picture frame perfection. when reality is spinning havoc around us and all we see is what we want to see. and only feel what we want to feel."
Posted by dying angel on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
- "god. i had to let this soak in before i could comment. there's such a thin line between hate and love that sometimes we get the two mixed up. we hate with a passion and love with an even stronger passion"
Posted by dying angel on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
- "'with your hand-me-down skin ten sizes too big' perfectly said. I love the passion behind this, it involved me with every word. "
Posted by Mylissa on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
- "Breaking bottles is cathartic. Yay bottles! Oh, and shooting them too. But it's messy. But fun. So you have to decide if you want to clean it up, but it's probably worth it. Bigger guns make bigger messes too. Good luck!"
Posted by DarkPoet on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
- "Telling you to be strong is a mistake hundred-folds wrong. Break like every last piece of china on the precarious shelf they expect you to balance. Everyone needs the breakdown when it gets like this. No one is that strong."
Posted by Unknown on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
- "I would love to comment on the perfection of the poem, if I didn't know where the inspiration came from. All it creates is empathic tears I refuse to shed. "
Posted by Unknown on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
- "i sat here for a couple minutes letting this sink in after reading... its great. echo saintedmad -oh so powerful. *messenger"
Posted by thelostmessenger on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
- "i.will.break.
fantastic imagery and power with those clear round pieces of punctuation; makes it more....emphatic. something in between resignation and indignation in the voice of this....powerful.nessa"
Posted by Unknown on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
- "Reminds me of my grandma's death last year. When I saw her I knew I was looking at a dead woman even though she didn't die until later on that night. Good job..."
Posted by DarkLord on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
- "And all I can think is to not mask death, so as to not be so shocked. I have written about my mother, but felt too personal to post."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
- "I know this all too well, kudos on the strength and clarity in its form. I think sometimes how I can plan to somehow lesson the pain for my loved ones if I am subject to a slow death. "
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
- "i remember her for what she was in life not the empty shell they took away.. she was full of love and she was beautiful"
Posted by jack paper on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
- "just over a year ago i experienced the same thing.. it takes something out of you, leaves you with a feeling that doesn't go away but still"
Posted by jack paper on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
- "Nothing is beautiful about death... but this peice had a beauty to it.. that I enjoyed and yet was frightened. bleh."
Posted by Unknown on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
- "I shouldn't have read this....I'll end up coming back again and again, though...dammit..."
Posted by Unknown on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
- "This.. it killed me. It took me back to the day my great grandma died..being the only one with her when she passed.. seeing this.. hearing this.. I... remember as if it were yesterday. (only 3 years ago)...No words..."
Posted by Drea on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
- "It hurts so bad.. because I know this time is coming for me as well. you know I've always admired your writing. Thanks again Miss Rachel."
Posted by ashottothetemple on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
- "startling contrast to what we'd like to believe, even moreso emphasized by the terse flow of thought.....puncture wounds of fear and punctuated by anger....clarity beyond; beyond no.thing beautiful....immense and emotive"
Posted by Unknown on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
- "It is a very heart ripping experience being with a loved one during their last moments... Great write... "
Posted by Unknown on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
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