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- "hole-E shit...the 'ALBATROSS' lands!!!! *Turn off your bloody caps!*....it's been tooooooooooooooo long (bit like my boring comments); you 've made me wait.....and wait...and *SNORES*....and now I am awake!!! You're actually a great haiku writer, this was c-c-c-cold; and quite packed. Even. And for me I like how the no sense could easily be *drum roll please*..."nonsense". Maybe? As though...space honours nonsense....a single snowflake that can snow in the house of gods....bloody big snowflake if you ask me! And I like how that 'sense' of heaven is perhaps cold, is perhaps a metaphor for some sort of inaccessibility.....yeah, 17 syllables of very resonating force, what a picture you paint....what vivacious structure you untangle. And thank diddly fuck...amen! To a post....I consider this a warm up; there's no going back now.....more please!!!! Bravo....** claps away**"
Posted by stryder on "Coldpacked Pantheon" by ALBATROSS
- "I'm not overly fond of the form, myself, but holy shit that's deep & original. Don't see many haikus like this one. I'm not able to make so few words say so much, I guess. Much respect! Great poem! Hah!...I'm living proof that 'space honors no sense'...."
Posted by Unknown on "Coldpacked Pantheon" by ALBATROSS
- "i'm a big fan of haiku ... especially when it rises to paint such a vivid image as this .. lovely title .. beautiful ... simply beautiful.. thank you for sharing :)"
Posted by Genocide Pony on "Coldpacked Pantheon" by ALBATROSS
- "awaited genius; profoundly simple. complexity in wonder and singularity. .... and really this hits me hard...the title alone conjures this immense weight; an abandoned faith, a falsely deified quiet. . .. . i read this and feel an incredible sense of isolation....shattering the silence....it takes all of one's senses to be able to still one's self in the midst of all.....trembling....there is a foreshadowing, slightly harrowing, and i dun know if you just plucked a discord from my own hurt, or if. .. . . yes. this is long awaited."
Posted by Unknown on "Coldpacked Pantheon" by ALBATROSS
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