Comments by All Members
- "...the shorts ... perfect! Vacation shorts used in the forest where you see things in a diffrent way, or where you use the shorts. I hate vacation for this reason, time and landscape = gateway to hell O_o A collection of hellish trips. My view of it. Tige"
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "A collection of shorts (thats not a title)" by Clementine
- "This portrays a faithful setting for what common society has become. At least we can still find art it in, no matter how fractured and "wrong" it seems to fit. I particularly liked the "film noir villain", nice touch, interesting, self-conscious piece."
Posted by Unknown on "Letterbox Buisness" by Clementine
- "God, I loved it until the last line. Something about the real world, as generic as a Starbucks, ruined the style for me. Loved the rhyme, the play on words as always..."
Posted by Liz on "Junkyard Sarah" by Clementine
- "Eh like you said, who cares... awesome write, I like it, even if it is just to clear the blockage. Wasted death tastes like shiny..."
Posted by stormtalk on "Junkyard Sarah" by Clementine
- "Jonahtastic as always... you need a personal proofreader to surgically remove your poetic birth defects... and a personal surgeon to poetically remove your liver..."
Posted by stormtalk on "Junkyard Sarah" by Clementine
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