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  • "In halves, eh? I like the title, the yolking together of the two realms one might say of spirituality another might say of art... the ink/tears metaphor is given new life here; it seems that if we aren't bleeding these words, then we're producing them through little salty trails down our cheeks... sleeping with the remnants of our emotional coping. This was a fun read, I like the half method and the trope was well developed with a few unique turns of thought. Welcome to dp!"
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