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- ""bleeds beauty" not melody!! I feel bad for misquoting. Ah, well, I might as well add another of my faves from this masterpiece.."Cyber-genetic routine tall tales scraping up to the skies""
Posted by carlosjackal on ".empty.bottle.amarone.nights." by verablue
- "This has to be up there as one of your best, Bazil. "Even tragedy bleeds melody through that wicked melody".."I sweep up the splinters and lock the doors".."tangled blue hair and canvas skin"...Just a few of the lines I adored. "
Posted by carlosjackal on ".empty.bottle.amarone.nights." by verablue
- "this is simply amazing. the last line truely echoed..brilliant and beautiful. "
Posted by Unknown on "more." by verablue
- "now that its been a while, the second half left me wanting more (hence the title, im sure). like an arrow shot straight up, your work always seems to grace the skies and bring ozone down with it. and you never know when its going to hit..."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "more." by verablue
- "....ok.... the first half had my heart at arrest. do you know how many times i have sat in the back of places smoking and drinking thinking the same thoughts? second half... left me"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "more." by verablue
- "I really like this it carried a nice sting.. and it does actually leave you wanting more. brilliantly done."
Posted by Tania on "more." by verablue
- "..and so do I..brilliantly crafted, this was succinct dark art poetry at its best. :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "more." by verablue
- "I want more, and more and more. you are just stunning. simply amazing with the flow, words and emotion. "
Posted by Mylissa on "more." by verablue
- "Hmmm. This leaves almost a dirty taste behind. I think the colour of the text does a bit of irony to the work. This is like a stamp, smashed into my consciousness. +tpu+"
Posted by Unknown on "more." by verablue
- "you honesty never lacks conviction or integrity. even in the ambiguity of metaphores, you seem to present subjects delicate as rose petels in a steele grip. i wrote once -had gernade supernove-, it perfectly describes you."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "de//fragment this mess" by verablue
- "pyschosomatic melodramas.....chafes like ruby dreams; the straight jacket poetics.....something almost cold lonely and investigating; the shifting tone of this represents uncertianty and disillusion in a crafted fashion...totally wicked!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "de//fragment this mess" by verablue
- ""And I won’t sugar coat it for you
The future’s still trapped behind your eyes
The mirror’s intact
Shattered with secrets
Torn and bruised" very good
"
Posted by Unknown on "de//fragment this mess" by verablue
- "Wow...wow...I don't know what else to say...the painful realities of this write have clogged my throat and left me reeling in acid rain...this is excellent...~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "de//fragment this mess" by verablue
- "*taken aback* There was something so morbid and twisted about this and at the same time blurred like a memory out of focus or a story with details missing so as to leave the dear reader in confusion...Brilliant as ever, Bazil :))))"
Posted by carlosjackal on "tarnished/tragic/travesty" by verablue
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