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  • "I this alot. I especially like the reference to Natas. I like this more than Hate because like u said yesterday it's not just hatred. I'm glad u got this one written down before u forgot it. Keep rapping ur good at it!! :)"
    Posted by rainbowgoth on "enemies at the gates" by deathfearsnone
  • "Nah, man. I'm kidding. I did like the hip-hop feel to this, with a little bit of goth rock thrown in. Goth rock, right? Whatever. I liked your sorta free verse rhyme, and you had some pretty good phrase turns and metaphors. I enjoyed this, man. Nic"
    Posted by Alanarchy on "enemies at the gates" by deathfearsnone
  • "You rhyme like will smith. Your flow is weak, son! Weak! I'd battle this, but the fire I spit would be like bringin a shotgun to a knife fight. Bla-ow!"
    Posted by Alanarchy on "enemies at the gates" by deathfearsnone
  • "omg I love this it makes me feel as if someone put my thoughts my feelings and emotions into poetry better than I could ever imagine... Simply beautiful"
    Posted by Unknown on "Life through death prt2" by deathfearsnone
  • "Mother and Father will stay with you. And so will I. God doesn't mean to ignore us but that's just his nature. He's not the way everyone wants him to be."
    Posted by rainbowgoth on "Untitled" by deathfearsnone
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