Comments by All Members
- "I really like the imagery in the 4th stanza here. The piece as a whole conveys a kind of sarcastic mood. I admire your style. I will continue to review your writings. -Gideon"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "Projection Screen Romance" by Mathesix
- "wow, amazing write... knowledge interwoven with neurotic imagery, I don't know how it writhes or forms its shape, but trailing these words is pure delight."
Posted by Unknown on "Chloroform and Daffodils" by Mathesix
- "Joshua, this is amazing! The imagery is beautiful and metaphorical. There are too many great things in this piece to pick one favorite line. Thank you thank you. -Gideon"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "Chloroform and Daffodils" by Mathesix
- "This was breathtaking to the very last letter; Your words seem to warp reality to their tastes. This was a favorite before the fourth stanza on the first trip around.."
Posted by Skye on "Chloroform and Daffodils" by Mathesix
- "I don't think I got round to reading it before: this epic stroke of lunacy just made me want to scratch out my eyballs and let me bleed everywhere..for the gods possessed my feeble body..holy shit what a post!!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Chloroform and Daffodils" by Mathesix
- "this is ridiculously unbelievabl..quite literally an astonishing jaw dropping explosion of language and images surreal and in the twilight zone; hell fire man this is the shit!!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Chloroform and Daffodils" by Mathesix
- "a refreshingly melancholic piece exhaled beautifully on a surreal canvass. it's almost impossible to pick a favourite stanza, but one i particularly commend is 'Oh, enter darling, sheepskin wearing/Shedding personalities like a chameleon/The shoe won’t "
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Chloroform and Daffodils" by Mathesix
- "If I were to trail my fingertips across the surface of a past I hate remembering, they would come away sticky with the remnants of this piece every time. Excellently written...this is, as Kel said, breathtaking. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Projection Screen Romance" by Mathesix
- "this is fuckin mint..especially like the first line of stanza two..holy fuckers thats mad!!! Some incredible language on display here...the words have punch and resonance..yes they do!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Projection Screen Romance" by Mathesix
- "like june..this hit a bit close to home..all the broken loves..shattered promises made by kisses.. this..its just amazing..its just unbelieveably incredible..how you capture my hearts pain..its just..breathtaking -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Projection Screen Romance" by Mathesix
- "Overwhelming, this. Forceful imagery & Heated, bite-your-lip flow that swelled in the back of my throat.. and the last line dimmed the lights to let me weep in the dark. Excellent as always, Josh. Wow, just wow."
Posted by Unknown on "Projection Screen Romance" by Mathesix
- "your writes never cease to amaze me, and feel every emtion possible. Like pf said, theres alot to get lost in..you are an excellent writer, such amazing talent you have...im glad to be in aquaintence with such a great poet and guy -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Junesong Provision" by Mathesix
- "then you're missing out; and aloud it slides off the tongue so beautiful and haunting with a reverence and sorrow born of heavenly bodies---emotion turned by time itself; a truly lovely write tinged with romantic sadness...~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Junesong Provision" by Mathesix
- "there is so much to get lost in here that you really must read it a few times to take it all in; the poetic elements, the story, the pain, the beauty are all likely to distract if you only read it once"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Junesong Provision" by Mathesix
- "You have a bard's tongue, good sire. And a engrossing vocabulary to back it up. I slipped along to this like melancholy on ice. Write on. -Alanarchy."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Junesong Provision" by Mathesix
- "oh dear, you'll burn in hell for that Josh, might even have to listen to some Milli Vanilli... ~apologizes profusely for causing mischief instead of commenting~ i haven't slept in 50 hours. zzzz ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Junesong Provision" by Mathesix
- "haha somtimes i enjoy Hatter's comments as much as the poem itself. I think this was marvolouse. well done"
Posted by Dei on "Junesong Provision" by Mathesix
- "this is beautifully, intricately woven...like staring at the nitesky...at ONE star in particular...and just breathing the essence of .it. in...and suddenly, you are covered in stardust. this is beautiful. painfully so, but so intimately.wondrous..."
Posted by AniDayz on "Junesong Provision" by Mathesix
- "let me try again..this poem is a landscape of word prowess; tiger prwols of magnificent colours and gregarious slam of language and metaphor feasts..or, in less flowery waffle...fucking great..ha ha! "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Junesong Provision" by Mathesix
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