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  • "that was sweet ... extended compassion with some intricate detail " .... raindrops darken the concrete stairs ..." very smooth like choronzon said ... great work ... funguy"
    Posted by capt_funguy on "A Prayer" by wannabe_rebel
  • "I found the theme kind of humorous, but the flow is seamless and your choice of words just all fit together. Awesome."
    Posted by Choronzon on "A Prayer" by wannabe_rebel
  • "very effective piece indeed. Your use of imagery and metaphor is originally done and well-controlled here; meaning is clear and the emotion...quietly vivid. Fine write! :)"
    Posted by purr_verse on "A Thirteen Year Old Dream" by wannabe_rebel
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