Comments by All Members
- "that was sweet ... extended compassion with some intricate detail " .... raindrops darken the concrete stairs ..." very smooth like choronzon said ... great work ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "A Prayer" by wannabe_rebel
- "I found the theme kind of humorous, but the flow is seamless and your choice of words just all fit together. Awesome."
Posted by Choronzon on "A Prayer" by wannabe_rebel
- "very effective piece indeed. Your use of imagery and metaphor is originally done and well-controlled here; meaning is clear and the emotion...quietly vivid. Fine write! :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "A Thirteen Year Old Dream" by wannabe_rebel