Self Inflicted Fate

By ReddropX

My last step was air
Though I didn't even care
The times that I need you
You’re never really there

As my pain grows
So does the noise below
I know that it's near
My death becomes clear

Watching the ground
As I'm spiraling down
Brace for the pain
Nothing really lost
Maybe something left to gain

Numb and pitch black
I've always liked it like that
Yet, I'm still not free
Your memory lingers in me

Trapped in my death
Never take another breath
Never to escape
My self inflicted fate

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© 2007 ReddropX
Published on Sunday, May 27, 2007.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • ReddropX On Monday, March 17, 2008, ReddropX (20)By person wrote:

    Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

  • RubyXero On Saturday, March 15, 2008, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    very nice write. i loved it. that is my choice of suicide were i to choose one...cuz you're like flying for a bit before the impact. :D

  • A former member wrote: yeahh... Just the flow, it all goes together and perfectly rhymes. i'm pretty amazed. You're my new favorite. :

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