The Lonely Truth
By Hurtmeplease
The pain digs deep
Feelings and memories crumble off the walls of my soul,
Gathering at the bottom of the hole
I know now that a tree cries louder
When no one is there to watch it fall
There is a power in this world
That can only be felt with love
But it is not love
It is beyond that
It is rare and found only between two people
To describe it would take the length of a friendship
And even still it's truth would be missing
The energy off their eyes
The feel of their touch
The moments shared with only the awarness of themselves
Time only makes these things more meaningful
An emtion so expansive
It becomes a part of you
I miss her even though we are not far apart
I want her to be a total part of my life
But she must do what she has to do
Who she is, is why |I love her
That's where this feeling comes from
She will always be a part of me
Comments on "The Lonely Truth"
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On Friday, April 20, 2007, GraveFlower
(249) wrote:
of course she will, it is hard to let people go, any one go, if you once loved them, i love how u compared yourself to a lonly tree in the beginning, you rock my world ~*dani*~
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On Friday, April 20, 2007, Imsosickxxx
(80) wrote:
Very well written, soft, beautiful...well done.
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On Thursday, April 19, 2007, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
you have touched on rare tender words.......with dignity and wise introspection.......very well written...............urban