Death

By Hurtmeplease

Solemn black
Cloak of ebony
No body can be seen
Bow of steel above his head
He thrives for you
He lives for death
A shaded smile of a night's face
He is so still
The calmful finalness of his stare
He wants you patiently
Cold metal against your skin
You want him so please him
He is unfeeling
He dosen't care about you
Don't follow him
Too late the metal is hot and red now
He has taken you
He's destroyed you
But you don't care now, do you
Because you have destroyed your friends

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© 2007 Hurtmeplease
Published on Wednesday, April 18, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Midian On Wednesday, May 30, 2007, Midian (19)By person wrote:

    Nice. Evil shit... I love it!

  • GraveFlower On Wednesday, April 18, 2007, GraveFlower (249)By person wrote:

    oh yea, once again, did i tell you how amazing you are ~*dani*~ i ♥ your work!

  • GraveFlower On Wednesday, April 18, 2007, GraveFlower (249)By person wrote:

    .....people are sick and disturbing,, i love this, teriffic! ~*dani*~

  • A former member wrote: very dark and morbid. absolutely lovely. ~ saddened.

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