Dry Smoke
By DiscordiaDarling
..And maybe I was wrong,
for ever declaring that I was worth.
All the moments wasted with words.
..But maybe you're wrong,
for never arguing the facts.
Or slamming my head against the wall.
This isn't a competition,
to see who can break the most hearts.
Only a scavenger hunt for something
beyond our reach.
..And no this isn't the time,
nor place to bring out the big guns.
To shoot me down like a Nazi,
in world war two.
Only what we both want,
even though you're too shallow.
To realize you need this sort of closure.
Air filled promises,
and tarnished fantasies.
All left from a whirl wind of emotions.
That tore through this house,
and my loyal smile.
Evaporating all hopes for the future.
Like a sadistic sun.
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© 2007 GrotesqueEuthanasia
Published on Friday, April 13, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, April 13, 2007, Tania
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i really liked this one... very nice indeed.
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On Friday, April 13, 2007, Enigma
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Nice work.
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A former member wrote:
..... Excellent. -Marlena
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On Friday, April 13, 2007, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
potent and daunting......a vison of true sadness..................well done