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My gift to You.
By Mnemora
I'll play the fool if that makes you smile.
I'll lie to myself for an approving nod.
Men don't really have feelings, I guess,
so don't feel bad about the knife in my heart.
Chicks in movies always talk 'bout the perfect man,
I tried to be so for you.
But you don't want that, really,
so i'll sit here and wait.
I'll bide my time and take back those roses,
that shit's too romantic anyhow.
But don't feel bad, you fucking succubus,
When I steal your innocence... and laugh.
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© 2007 hzr
Published on Sunday, February 25, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, June 26, 2007, capt_funguy
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wrote:
ok ... i read all of your posted works ... and gotta say , it was a delight... i'm hitting this because of those last two lines ... they're priceless. you've a very direct tone, your works speak themselves ... that's huge, so freakin' important...
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On Tuesday, June 26, 2007, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
you also - topic jump - tackling different subjects ... also a big deal. just trying to sum up an overall for you ... ascension was great too. in a nutshell ... you're a joy to read ... cool man ... funguy
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A former member wrote:
This sent chills down my spine it was so good.
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, The Shattered Heart
(30) wrote:
Well, I must say. Feelings do poor out into this. Personally, I've never wanted the perfect guy. They are too romantic. Good write. =^.^= Kat aka T.O.C.
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