You're The Rain
By DiscordiaDarling
If I could compare you to anything darling, it would be the rain....
I never know when or if you're coming.
but something inside me always knows you will.
Sooner or Later.
You will be here.
Is it intuition?
Or do I know that if you don't I will wither and die.
You come as a drizzle.
On a hot summers night...
pounding at my window.
you sing me to sleep.
Then you come as a storm.
heavy and a loud.
Sounds that shiver me to the core.
keeping me in fear for days.
However you come.
Whenever you choose to let yourself go.
You always give me exactly what I need.
Life for another day.
(I'm not very happy with the way this one turned out. However, I wanted
it to be simple. So I suppose I got what I wanted.)
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© 2007 GrotesqueEuthanasia
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On Tuesday, May 22, 2007, Mari
(425) wrote:
hm
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On Wednesday, May 2, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
very good, simplicity can be intresting, this is one of my favs from you.
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A former member wrote:
So damn perfect.
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A former member wrote:
I love this poem. The comparison between that person that makes it alright and the rain made my heart ache with a smile. Beautiful. ~FAV~
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A former member wrote:
Personally I think this is your best one. Simply said but oh so beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
sweet and eloquent
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, jack paper
(126) wrote:
there is beauty in simplicity... i really like this.. write on