You're The Rain

By DiscordiaDarling

If I could compare you to anything darling, it would be the rain....

I never know when or if you're coming.
but something inside me always knows you will.
Sooner or Later.
You will be here.
Is it intuition?
Or do I know that if you don't I will wither and die.

You come as a drizzle.
On a hot summers night...
pounding at my window.
you sing me to sleep.

Then you come as a storm.
heavy and a loud.
Sounds that shiver me to the core.
keeping me in fear for days.

However you come.
Whenever you choose to let yourself go.
You always give me exactly what I need.
Life for another day.


(I'm not very happy with the way this one turned out. However, I wanted it to be simple. So I suppose I got what I wanted.)

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© 2007 GrotesqueEuthanasia
Published on Tuesday, February 13, 2007.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"
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  • Mari On Tuesday, May 22, 2007, Mari (425)By person wrote:

    hm

  • prettydisgrace On Wednesday, May 2, 2007, prettydisgrace (96)By person wrote:

    very good, simplicity can be intresting, this is one of my favs from you.

  • A former member wrote: So damn perfect.

  • A former member wrote: I love this poem. The comparison between that person that makes it alright and the rain made my heart ache with a smile. Beautiful. ~FAV~

  • A former member wrote: Personally I think this is your best one. Simply said but oh so beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: sweet and eloquent

  • jack paper On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, jack paper (126)By person wrote:

    there is beauty in simplicity... i really like this.. write on

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