Offer Me This
By Sepulcrawl
I endeavour to be humble
but consistently fail.
Yours was the light of the world
in me -- within me -- and
I knew something
of yours; something
which would titilate my
finger tips as they would
run over your
indiscretion.
Taken from root
with felling notion
of the grander days
in retrograde.
It slew from form
function
and something fecund
droops over
cliffs
into your pool
of broken acclaim.
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© 2007 Napalmface
Published on Tuesday, February 6, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2007, Sin
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brilliant as usual but those first two lines stole my heart, you had me at hello so to speak haha...
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A former member wrote:
"It slew from form function and something fecund..." [fēcundus: love that fertile Lovecraftian sound: fecund!] (nice subtle touch of 'uh-lit-uh-ray-shuhn' within). Profoundly sub–umbrā; well expressed. We all endeavour that "light" yet...
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On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
I love how you write..I need to read more. wonderful.
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A former member wrote:
These words flowed like a glistening stream. Woderful work...
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A former member wrote:
Brilliant, utterly brilliant. ~FAV~
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A former member wrote:
wow. this was deep. ~ red.