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A feeling without a name
By EnlightenedFailure
So casually it came
A feeling without a name
Dreams shattered
Hopes lost
I fell
Fell so deep
Darkness became my heart
So painful was this darkness
This darkness that mocked my life
This darkness that was my fear
My fear of being alone
But as I thought of giving in
As life’s treasure was put out of my reach
This treasure of caring
This treasure of intangible wealth
She came
At first a feeling
A feeling in which I found no name
Slowly it came to be
Not a feeling but an angel
An angel of joy
An angel of opportunity
An angel which brought with her life’s deepest love
This angel took me from my well of misery
She took my sorrows and in return gave me compassion
She took my doubts and gave me dreams
She took my hand and gave me life
Gave me the life that I so desperately prayed for
A life of love
A life of hope
A life of caring
A life with her
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© 2006 Carl Gill
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On Saturday, December 29, 2007, Niemand
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wrote:
*sighs*
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On Saturday, December 30, 2006, mywristshurt
(408) wrote:
you must be in deep love or something to have been hypnotized into thinking that everything is peanuts and rainbows.. well, good luck with her.. it was an okay write if ure always idk, happy
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