The Monastery
By Overactive Insomniac
The monastery stood alone atop the hill, bathed in silver moonlight.
The windows looked like piercing eyes concealing a secret hidden for all
time. The door was boarded up, and had the menacing look of a grotesque
demon smiling through broken shards of rotting teeth. The building stood
in relapse, a figure of time and space. The wood itself was a sullied gray
from the weathering of its thick skin. All who saw it were repelled by
its hideously decrepit state.
No one entered the infamous structure. No one even neared the skeletal
ruins. Out of fear. Fear of something not mentioned for centuries but was
somehow breathed into the soul of even the smallest child. There was sinister
regard, even an obscene respect, for this place; and all those God-fearing
people living in town knew to be leery.
Being a newcomer, I wondered where and when this foreboding came about,
but when I inquired, I was consistently circumvented. On my own, I decided
to uncover these stormy secrets.
Not without some trepidation and doubt, I began my grueling studies. Starting
at the Public Hall, I gathered old letters, photos, and such to obtain
any information that might lead me toward my objective. Thus went several
months of gathering and sifting through heaps of useless knowledge. It
seemed I was getting nowhere, despite all my searching.
One night, late at my studies, I heard a rap on my door. A chill slowly
crept up my arms to my spine, where it seemed to settle indefinitely. In
a state of detached interest, I slowly rose, moving toward the door; revulsion
bubbling below the surface, ignored. I opened the door. There stood a man,
or the specter of a man, older than should have been possible. He wore
a black, ragged, stained robe; his face obscured by a drooping hood. His
eyes; however, keen and sharp, drilled into mine. I addressed him thickly
but only his eyes acknowledged the address, glaring at me with the same
gleam as the eyes of the old church. Horrified, I swallowed dryly and asked
him what he wanted. He continued to glower but his mouth curled into a
grueling, sharp-toothed leer. Out from under his robe, he extended a withered,
gnarled hand with protruding knuckles and long, jagged nails. Seizing my
arm, he pulled at me with formidable strength, out the door. In a low,
croaking voice, he explained his position: master of all, king of the unliving,
teller of lies, and killer of fools and saints. He had come to take me
to my destiny.
In horror, I drew back but he continued to pull me on, undaunted by my
resistance.
“Follow me,” he demanded.
I followed.
Moving in the stifling darkness, the hour tolled in the distance. Midnight.
A perturbing thought rose in my consciousness. Not only was it the “witching
hour” but also the very night when hell was to take over the earth. Halloween.
That innocent, candy-laden holiday of my youth. Not since I was a very
small child had this occasion given my heart such a reason to beat wildly
or my nerves to be drawn taught. Never had it seemed anything more than
a night for foolish pranks and bellyaches. Until now. A slick, greasy wave
of nausea rose in the back of my throat.
Abruptly, my senses were adverted to the scene before me. Lifting my eyes,
I felt the blood drain, for we were standing before the very hill on which
the monastery loomed. I shrunk away but could not break free from the tenacious
grasp of that old demon. Up the hill he drew me, wrenching at my arm as
I stumbled on. The windows stared down upon us, reflecting the blood-red
moon that had been hidden by the now-dispersing clouds. The glowering mouth
stood open, greeting us with a hiss from the wind whistling through its
fractured hinges. Inside, a deep smoky fire spewed daggers of flame about
the room and out the chimney, where they played against the darkness and
died in the moonlight. The crackling timbers sounded like bones being splintering
into blistering shards. With a powerful shove, the demon forced me into
this carcass of insanity. Upon entering, the fire became unbearable, burning
my face. Choking on the searing, putrid vapors, I felt bile fill the back
of my mouth. I became aware of faces gaping at me. As I squinted in the
foul air, impressions of grisly scenes stood lurid against the dim, rotting
walls. These repugnant visions told me all I had been searching for these
last, long months. The secret was poured in through every sense. The brutal
murders, bloody sacrifices, and gruesome tortures; all forced upon the
most innocent – the children - by those most trusted – the parents.
Feeling a creeping loss of sensation, my body slumped to the floor, acutely
aware of the wails and screams floating about my head.
Awakening to the sun stabbing my eyes, I jerked upright, and found myself
lying at the hearth of my fireplace. Shaking the fog from my head, I rose
to my feet, relieved that the night terror was over, and I turned to go
to the kitchen to make a much-needed cup of coffee. It was then that I
felt it, clutched in my hand, the black robe, singed, and stiff with dry
blood.
Comments on "The Monastery"
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On Sunday, December 18, 2016, Overactive Insomniac
(3) wrote:
Jack_White: Thank you so so much. To be compared to Poe and Lovecraft is a huge honor. You made my day!
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A former member wrote:
I loved it...!!! You´re a talented writer much like Poe or Hp Lovecraft...damn this was AWESOME!!!!!
Dark and like a horror novel found in a Magazine.
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A former member wrote:
Wow that was a lot too read. But yes I found the story quite interesting, I really liked how the parents betrayed the children, for they are the children's most trusted people.