Fallen Angel

By Overactive Insomniac

And upon thy cloud
Of white and silver
Did I see you flying hither
And to you did I say, I do
To fly with thee, apart, undo

And over the hills
Did we see down
Upon the kings and queens around
And ask you, I did say be mine
To which you held my hand, entwined

And under the seas
Of blue and green
Did we flow through, apart unseen
Until we reached the land of Rue
And did just lay in sand, thereto

And winds did blow and cry about
The beach where we did sleep so sound
And cover us up so gently to
Conceal us from the prying few
And lay there still, we corpse, we two

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© 2006 Overactive Insomniac
Published on Wednesday, October 18, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: man...i had to comment twice. this is very good. i love every aspect about it.

  • beautifulfallenangel On Wednesday, November 1, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (62)By person wrote:

    reminds me of the poetry we are force to read in our literture classes....all the same.though........still love it

  • A former member wrote: this was amazing!!

  • A former member wrote: very nice man. i enjoyed reading this...all 4 times :P but yes,i gotta give your props. *props*

  • A former member wrote: Okay, First of all you have to get a membership, because anyone who can write like that deserves it. ][Nstant ][nsanity

  • Overactive Insomniac On Wednesday, October 18, 2006, Overactive Insomniac (3)By person wrote:

    I bow humbly to your opinion. Thank you for taking a brief glance into my brain to see what resides there.

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