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Untitled
By Tibi
Your mouth is a cave
Salt crystals and cigarette ash
Echoes
aches songs hums
I crawl into
under you
under your
underarms
Ashes to ashes
dust to – hush
I must (the hair- how it falls)
must leave
We turn into shiver and sweat
Fever then dust
To dust
(the hair – how it falls when I tear)
Dear dearest
read me to sleep
read me of us
You fall
You crush when I bend
Start from the end
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© 2006 Tibi
Published on Wednesday, September 13, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
very nice job
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A former member wrote:
and wow beautiful poems you need to write more so I can read them
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A former member wrote:
wow beautiful words
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A former member wrote:
Original in every way, stray thoughts lost in the structure like kids in a haunted house. I like this a lot.
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A former member wrote:
this was so beautiful
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A former member wrote:
loved how this flowed. nice job.
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On Friday, October 6, 2006, Tonights Decision
(137)
wrote:
left me in.. suspense, wow..
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A former member wrote:
a post from you is always a joy to read..this was scattered yet almost hushed..beautifully done.
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On Thursday, September 14, 2006, Tibi
(1) wrote:
thank you sweet have kept reading you x
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