Oh...

By Lucklost

Oh, were you finished with that?


No. I was not.


Oh, I thought you were finished.


Why? I know you saw me. I know you did.


Oh.


Oh?! Oh?! How can you say Oh for taking my life?


I thought you were finished living it, so I took it from you because you were at the end of your time.


What makes you think you are the Creator himself to decide that? You can't just take it up from me like that just because I was resting from making it even more of a hellish mess.


Well...


Well what?!


I am...I am...


What? YOu are what? An asshole?


God!










**totally random and comments are welcome

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© 2006 Lucklost
Published on Thursday, September 7, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: What a unique take on such a common onomatopoeia. I’m looking forward to more of your writings.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Thursday, September 7, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Soundedrandom. *Shrugs* I dont realy like word repeating, sept when the word holds more meaning then oh . hehe

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