Together enter the gates og hell

By stuckinneutral_09

The pristine white hall ways now running red
Cromson pouring down the walls
This vision she got while they shared a kiss
Two guns pointed lovingly at eachothers temples
"meet me in death"
"love me forever"
While sharing one last kiss, the shots echoing in two profound bangs
Two thumpsas they fell together in each others arms onto the cold floor
One last vision of everlasting love
As the blood raced to the door

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© 2006 stuckinneutral_09
Published on Saturday, May 13, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • stuckinneutral_09 On Monday, June 19, 2006, stuckinneutral_09 (9)By person wrote:

    Hmm i guess That if your going out to get it right the first time and use a boom stick

  • Grey Lies On Friday, June 9, 2006, Grey Lies (185)By person wrote:

    it seems your poems are center-ed around guns....why is that?

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