When the sun goes down

By stuckinneutral_09

We shared some good times
you know i still love you,but when the sun goes down im gone
The smile on my face didnt match the harshness in my cold eyes
I wanted you to see that, to love me, to save me
But now i know you never will and still i love you with every moment
So i wont say goodbye and i wont be leaving this house
I am sorry you will come home
To see me hanging in the air
And i know you are reading this so i have one more thing to say
"I will always love you"

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© 2006 stuckinneutral_09
Published on Saturday, May 13, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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