~Rain~
By Rafe
Flames dancing, reaching skyward
burning flesh and homes.
Friends, family, everyone i ever cared about;
dead.
Arrow, axe, sword, spear, not battle; massacure.
Dancing shadows, trying to hide.
First arrow; Death's Kiss.
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Silence...
Silence but for the mourning cries
lead by Wolf and Raven.
Three hundred of us.
Now ten.
Smoke, funeral-pyres, Eternal Night.
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The last fire to burn...
Garbed in what he wore at Rite, Ritual, Feastival.
As was i.
Not his pyre, not mine, ours.
I lay beside him, my head on his chest.
Our fingers intertwined, holding hands.
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The flames rise, as the rain falls,
kissing away my tears like he did.
It kissed my tears away,
but it has yet to kiss away my pain.
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Qi'bak so debayashi - still walking mortal coil.
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Comments on "~Rain~"
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On Thursday, November 8, 2012, lenores_death
(15) wrote:
was amazing (aka--am not using proper grammar because of awe) wonderfully written and powerful. good job.
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On Thursday, April 20, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
this is.. beautiful.. amazing write, keep going
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A former member wrote:
"It kissed my tears away, but it has yet to kiss away my pain." ..gods, I can't even begin to voice how staggeringly painful this is .. reading this, like fingering the holes in my chest..
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A former member wrote:
..and part of me wishes you hadn't made it so beautiful, though.. it is easier to embrace that way..? *sigh* Tumultuous write.
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A former member wrote:
The rain can't begin to wash away some wounds.. infinite respect. ~ June
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A former member wrote:
oh my god.wow.beaty transpires.-silver