~Rain~

By Rafe

Flames dancing, reaching skyward
burning flesh and homes.
Friends, family, everyone i ever cared about;
dead.
Arrow, axe, sword, spear, not battle; massacure.
Dancing shadows, trying to hide.
First arrow; Death's Kiss.

~

Silence...
Silence but for the mourning cries
lead by Wolf and Raven.
Three hundred of us.
Now ten.
Smoke, funeral-pyres, Eternal Night.

~

The last fire to burn...
Garbed in what he wore at Rite, Ritual, Feastival.
As was i.
Not his pyre, not mine, ours.
I lay beside him, my head on his chest.
Our fingers intertwined, holding hands.

~

The flames rise, as the rain falls,
kissing away my tears like he did.
It kissed my tears away,
but it has yet to kiss away my pain.

~
Qi'bak so debayashi - still walking mortal coil.
~

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© 2006 Rafe
Published on Thursday, April 20, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • lenores_death On Thursday, November 8, 2012, lenores_death (15)By person wrote:

    was amazing (aka--am not using proper grammar because of awe) wonderfully written and powerful. good job.

  • mywristshurt On Thursday, April 20, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    this is.. beautiful.. amazing write, keep going

  • A former member wrote: "It kissed my tears away, but it has yet to kiss away my pain." ..gods, I can't even begin to voice how staggeringly painful this is .. reading this, like fingering the holes in my chest..

  • A former member wrote: ..and part of me wishes you hadn't made it so beautiful, though.. it is easier to embrace that way..? *sigh* Tumultuous write.

  • A former member wrote: The rain can't begin to wash away some wounds.. infinite respect. ~ June

  • A former member wrote: oh my god.wow.beaty transpires.-silver

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