Crimson Rain

By The_Lady_in_the_Fire

Cold bitter winds slap my skin
I never was good or bad
Ive lost all I ever had.
Some call me crazy
Some call me mad
I only listened to one
But even she sings the same song
I believe Ill never belong cause...

(chorus)
One kiss before I cry
One shot to say good bye
All she had to do was lie
Tonight I end the pain
Trigger finger strain
Its only crimson rain

They say good guys finish last
I guess it was a blast but
To bad it didnt last
Between you and I
But just between you and me I say goodbye

(chorus)

Crimson rain
Is a cowards way out
One hears the pistols shout...
If she doesnt care
Neither will I
Just one shot goodbye
Only a gun will cry for me

(chorus)

Good bye
Good bye
Look at the rain
Beautiful crimson rain...


*Written by my fiance Blaze. He wrote it when he was 17 and pulled it out while cleaning and asked me to post it here. Let us know what you think!*

Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
© 2006 The_Lady_in_the_Fire
Published on Wednesday, March 1, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Lyrics"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "Crimson Rain"

Log in to post comments.
  • darkdesires On Friday, March 10, 2006, darkdesires (139)By person wrote:

    I can easily hear a tempo, a beat, a rythmn, even imagine how it would fully sound. Its amazing really... and I don't just that that cuz its 4 in the morning...

  • Omalleyjr On Friday, March 10, 2006, Omalleyjr (22)By person wrote:

    beautiful as one of your own

  • A former member wrote: i really enjoyed this, Could hear the words being sung as i read it. Beautiful work.

Contribution Level

The_Lady_in_the_Fire's Favorite Poets
The_Lady_in_the_Fire's Favorite Works
Share/Save This Post



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]