- Final Cut -

By TheMadPoet

I pick up the knife and start to cut.
I feel no pain, but it bleeds so much..

As the blood rushes out the thoughts rush in.
So Frustrating, how did this begin..

I think its better this way.
Not to fight in and just slowly fade..

I picked up a knife and made a cut today.
Not straight, Not slanted, in every way..

I dont know why; I just want it to end.
A world without me, A much bette place then..

For now, I ly on the floor and my body bleeds.
No one around to help me,Is this the end for me..

I pick up the knife and cut again.
I open the wound and stick my hand in..

Maybe i can reach in and pull out the problem.
This vein will have to do, I'll cut it for my sorrows..

I picked up a knife and started to cut.
I never knew I'd bleed this much..

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© 2006 TheMadPoet
Published on Monday, February 20, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This is a very good poem.I love the words and the feeling behind it.You capture everything you wanted and you wrote an amazing poem.Very nice I loved it.

  • Ladyhawke On Wednesday, September 22, 2010, Ladyhawke (394)By person wrote:

    The feeling of anguish and hurt in this poem, to cause you to want to cut the problem out. . . its amazing. The way you put it in words. You can totally feel the pain behind this. A sad write, but nonetheless, a great one:)

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