- Final Cut -
By TheMadPoet
I pick up the knife and start to cut.
I feel no pain, but it bleeds so much..
As the blood rushes out the thoughts rush in.
So Frustrating, how did this begin..
I think its better this way.
Not to fight in and just slowly fade..
I picked up a knife and made a cut today.
Not straight, Not slanted, in every way..
I dont know why; I just want it to end.
A world without me, A much bette place then..
For now, I ly on the floor and my body bleeds.
No one around to help me,Is this the end for me..
I pick up the knife and cut again.
I open the wound and stick my hand in..
Maybe i can reach in and pull out the problem.
This vein will have to do, I'll cut it for my sorrows..
I picked up a knife and started to cut.
I never knew I'd bleed this much..
Comments on "- Final Cut -"
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A former member wrote:
This is a very good poem.I love the words and the feeling behind it.You capture everything you wanted and you wrote an amazing poem.Very nice I loved it.
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2010, Ladyhawke
(394) wrote:
The feeling of anguish and hurt in this poem, to cause you to want to cut the problem out. . . its amazing. The way you put it in words. You can totally feel the pain behind this. A sad write, but nonetheless, a great one:)