I Won't Mind
By Lucklost
Pierce my pale milky skin.
Set my raging rivers free.
I won't mind.
Scratch away my face;
Pluck out my eyes.
I won't mind.
Enter me with unleashed rage.
Rip my insides to shreds.
I won't mind.
Leave scars on me with your steeple spikes...
make me bleed til all eternity.
I won't mind.
I yearn for this sweet haven of your abuse.
I take pride in showing my black and blue skin created by your deceit.
You won't mind if I took my turn, would you?
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© 2006 Lucklost
Comments on "I Won't Mind"
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On Sunday, April 1, 2007, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
You would totally mind if I plucked out your eye.
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On Saturday, January 27, 2007, Mari
(419) wrote:
well it definately is twisted. but its cool that way you know? i like it . maybe im sick too :)
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A former member wrote:
i loved this write. i related so much to it. and its nice to have a fellow real dark poet along side me. ~ red.
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On Wednesday, April 26, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
man what a turn around in the end..
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On Wednesday, March 29, 2006, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
Oh yes take your turn and let us see how he minds. Great write.
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A former member wrote:
Awsome.... rip my insides to shreds/I won't mind.... great write
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On Wednesday, February 1, 2006, Err0r
(358) wrote:
Aha. The end is great. I wonder if it's inappropriate to laugh at such a thing. I guess I'm twisted and sadistic. Oh well. Wonderful write.
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A former member wrote:
I can feel the emotion burning within you as you write this!! Excellent
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On Monday, January 23, 2006, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
take your tun, on him and show no mercym well written