I Won't Mind

By Lucklost

Pierce my pale milky skin.
Set my raging rivers free.
I won't mind.

Scratch away my face;
Pluck out my eyes.
I won't mind.

Enter me with unleashed rage.
Rip my insides to shreds.
I won't mind.

Leave scars on me with your steeple spikes...
make me bleed til all eternity.
I won't mind.

I yearn for this sweet haven of your abuse.
I take pride in showing my black and blue skin created by your deceit.
You won't mind if I took my turn, would you?

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© 2006 Lucklost
Published on Monday, January 23, 2006.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • stormtalk On Sunday, April 1, 2007, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    You would totally mind if I plucked out your eye.

  • Mari On Saturday, January 27, 2007, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    well it definately is twisted. but its cool that way you know? i like it . maybe im sick too :)

  • A former member wrote: i loved this write. i related so much to it. and its nice to have a fellow real dark poet along side me. ~ red.

  • mywristshurt On Wednesday, April 26, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    man what a turn around in the end..

  • Angst Queen On Wednesday, March 29, 2006, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    Oh yes take your turn and let us see how he minds. Great write.

  • A former member wrote: Awsome.... rip my insides to shreds/I won't mind.... great write

  • Err0r On Wednesday, February 1, 2006, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    Aha. The end is great. I wonder if it's inappropriate to laugh at such a thing. I guess I'm twisted and sadistic. Oh well. Wonderful write.

  • A former member wrote: I can feel the emotion burning within you as you write this!! Excellent

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Monday, January 23, 2006, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    take your tun, on him and show no mercym well written

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